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    Please help me review my writing task 2

    Some people think that schools should reward students with the best academic results, while others believe it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. It is unequivocal that these days, many schools still place heavy emphasis on...
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    Task 2

    Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. Is this a positive or negative development? Given the inexorable demand of energy globally for the last few decades, leading to the scarcity of fossil fuel which has acted as...
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    Writing task 2:

    Task 2: Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to unversity education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree ot disagree? As the tuition fees of higher education have increased...
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    Task 2: the news media has too much influence in people's lives today and this is a negative development.To what extent do you agree or disagree

    With the advancement of modern technology, the news media has developed inexorably over the last decades, especially with the appearance of digital newspapers, giving this industry an even more solid place in residents' minds than ever before. However, a school of thought holds that such...
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    Writing task 1

    The charts given illustrate the changes in revenue of five particular products in the international trade between two years 2015 and 2016. Overall, it is obvious that petroleum products remained dominant in the amount of export earnings in both two years while the most significant growth was...
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    Writing task 1 maps

    Thank you so much for your feedback!
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    Writing task 1 maps

    The diagrams illustrate the development occurring at the waterfront area of the Darwin town from 2009 to 2014. Overall, the downtown witnessed various changes, the most significant of which are the expansion of green- land zone areas with the construction of more amenities and housing. In the...
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    Writing task 1:

    The line graph compares the immigration rate of people coming from Asia, the UK and other regions who lived in Australia from 1976 to 2011. Overall, the proportion of immigrants in Australia witnessed a downward trend, albeit slightly during most of the period, except for the last ten years. In...
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    Please help me review my writing

    The charts given illustrate the number of attendees of four particular courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009, according to age and gender. Overall, Language was obviously the most popular course, in the sense that it attracted the highest number of participants. In addition, the...
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    Writing task 1

    The line graph illustrates the number of Caribbean visitors in a particular island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the Caribbean island surveyed gained more popularity throughout the period shown as the total number of travellers increased significantly. In addition, the quantity of tourists...
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    Please help me review my writing!

    The line graph compares three particular museums in terms of the number of tourists in four months during the summer of 2013. Overall, while the number of British museum monthly travellers fluctuated and Natural History museum’s fell, the figures for Science museum increased, albeit slightly...
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    Please help me review my writing. Thank you so much

    The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. The bar chart compares top ten nations in the world in terms of electricity generation and utilisation in the year 2014. Overall, all the nations except Germany produced electricity...
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    please help me correct my writing. Thank you very much

    The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The bar charts illustrate the number of...
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    please help me correct my writing task 1 . Thank you very much.

    Can you also predict what my band score for this task is. Thank you in advance!