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sabita thapa

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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph shows the proportion of contribution made by five different factories to the Brazil’s economy since 2009 and includes predictions until 2029.

Overall, finance provided the highest percentage of share to the economy in the past and is expected to become the biggest contributor. Manufacturing and food processing, on the other hand, were the lowest contributor in 2009, 2019 and is predicted to fall.

Beginning with real figure, Brazil received the highest share from the finance in 2009 and 2019 with around 31% and about 37% respectively. Oil, gas and coal’s contribution went up by around 5% from 2009 to 2019 while tourism and manufacturing declined by approximately 5% by 2019. For food processing, it’s contribution to economy increased significantly from 2009 to 2019 with around 11%.

Turning next to prediction figure, finance is projected to increased by around 5% from 2019 to 2029. Shared received from food processing and oil materials industry is expected to remain the same with the starting year. Manufacturing is the only business whose contribution to Brazil’s economy is predicted to went down dramatically from around 21% in 2009, nearly 16% in 2019 to approximately 5% in 2029.
 
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englishgeek

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The bar graph shows the proportion of the contribution made by five different factories to the Brazil’s economy since 2009 and includes predictions until for 2029.

Overall, finance provided the highest percentage of share to the economy in the past and is expected to become the biggest contributor going forward. Manufacturing and food processing, on the other hand, were the lowest contributor in 2009, 2019 and it is predicted to fall.

Beginning with real figures, Brazil received the highest share from the finance in 2009 and 2019 with around 31% and about 37% respectively. Oil, gas and coal’s contribution went up by around 5% from 2009 to 2019 while tourism and manufacturing declined by approximately 5% by 2019. For food processing, it’s contribution to economy increased significantly from 2009 to 2019 with around 11%.

Turning next to projections for the future prediction figure, finance is projected expected to increased by around 5% from 2019 to 2029. The share received from food processing and oil materials' industry is expected to remain the same with the starting year. Manufacturing is the only business whose contribution to Brazil’s economy is predicted to went down dramatically from around 21% in 2009, nearly 16% in 2019 and is predicted to decline further to approximately 5% in 2029.