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irfan334590

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The first chart provides statistical data of a questionnaire asking two queries whether they have traveled abroad in the period of 1994-1998 and the reason for the traveling while the second diagram illustrates visitors’ destinations throughout the given period. Western Europe was the most popular destination for tourists throughout the given time span, while North America was the least. Most people traveling purpose was to enjoy holidays whereas the least popular purpose was other reasons.

In the period 1994-1998 around 15,000 to 20,000 people traveling reason was holidays while approximately 2600 to 4000 people traveled for business purpose and see their relatives and friends, but only, about 1000 visitors traveling intention was other reasons.

In 1994, Western Europe was the most eminent destination of approximately 19,000 people, and it continued to rise until 1998. In 1998, around 24,000 residents visited Wester Europe. However, the popularity of North America and other areas was not significant and around 2000 to 4000 people traveled to other areas while North America was least popular with only 1000 to 3000 visitors in the given time period.1609863047845.png1609863382767.png
 
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englishgeek

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The first chart provides statistical data of a questionnaire asking two queries questions whether they UK residents have traveled abroad in the period of 1994-1998 and the reason for the traveling, while the second diagram illustrates visitors’ destinations throughout the given period. Western Europe was the most popular destination for tourists throughout during the given time span, while North America was the least. Most people stated that their traveling purpose was to enjoy holidays whereas the least popular purpose was other reasons. reason was to visit friends and relatives. A small number of people traveled for other reasons.

In the period from 1994 to 1998, around 15,000 to 20,000 people traveled ing reason was holidays for pleasure, while approximately 2600 to 4000 people traveled for business purpose and to see their relatives and friends, and about 1000 visitors traveling intention was other reasons traveled abroad for other unspecified reasons.

In 1994, Western Europe was the most eminent popular destination of with approximately 19,000 people visiting the region, and it this trend continued to rise until 1998. In 1998, around 24,000 residents visited Western Europe. However, the popularity of North America and other areas was not significant, and with around 2000 to 4000 people traveling to other areas while North America was least popular with only 1000 to 3000 visitors in the given time period.
 
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englishgeek

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Task Response: 7 (possibly a 6 if the criteria were more strictly applied)

Coherence and cohesion: 6 I don't think your paragraphs flow well from one to the next.

Lexical resource: 7

Grammatical range and accuracy: 7