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irfan334590

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The given graph demonstrates the number of male and female students who graduated in Canada in the period of 1992 to 2007.

Beginning from the graph, the number of female graduates were higher as compared to male throughout the period. In both cases, there has been noticed significant & slight variations with every passing year.

Female students, who passed from the institutes, in the year of 1992 were approximately one hundred thousand whereas male graduates were limited to seventy thousand, almost 30 per cent fewer. Both types of graduates increased dramatically until 1995. However, this trend declined for both sides till 2000, again a sharp increment noticed starting from 2001, and it continued to the year of 2004 and suddenly a slight dropped variation was monitored. In the year of 2006, male graduates reached up to nearly eighty-five thousand while female touch the number of one hundred and thirty-five thousands. In the end, female graduates were still higher around 30% than male.

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englishgeek

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The given graph demonstrates the number of male and female students who graduated in Canada in the period of from 1992 to 2007.

Beginning from the graph, The number of female graduates were was higher as compared to male graduates throughout the period. In both cases With both groups, there has have been noticed noticeably significant & and slight variations with every each passing year.

Female students, who passed from the institutes, graduates in the year of 1992 were approximately one hundred thousand, whereas male graduates were limited to seventy thousand, almost 30 per cent fewer. Both types groups of graduates increased dramatically until 1995. However, this trend declined for both sides groups till until 2000, again there was a sharp increment noticed starting from 2001, and it continued to the year of 2004, and then suddenly a slight dropped variation was monitored seen. In the year of 2006, male graduates reached up to nearly eighty-five thousand, while female graduates touch the number of approached one hundred and thirty-five thousands. In the end, female graduates were still higher at around 30% percent more than male graduates.
 

englishgeek

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I would score this task TA: 7, CC: 6.5, LR: 6, GRA: 6.

Please let me know your thoughts on my corrections and score.