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IELTS Writing Essay 2 Museum should be enjoyable places

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Faysal

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Some people think museum should be enjoyable places to attract and entertained young people, other thing the purpose of Museum should be to educate not entertain discuss both side and give your own opinion.

Museums are places where important object of culture, historical and scientific value are preserved and shows to the public. Some people said that the museum should be an entertainment place where people enjoy. Others opine that the museum should be an educational place where people earn valuable knowledge. However, I believe that the museum should be both- educative as well as entertain.

On the one hand, there is numerous reason why some people opine that the museum should be education purpose, the first and foremost when people visit the museum, they want to know about the history behind the objects displayed there. For instance,
Bangladesh National Museum is one of the biggest museums in Bangladesh, there are more than twenty thousand valuable monuments, art, handicraft and lots of different products exhibition in this place. Actually, the majority of those who visited this place expect to know more about the pieces of art and antiquities. Therefore, the museum should focus on providing all that information in a nice and easy manner.

On the other hand, the reason given in favour of the museum becomes an entertainment source is that way the people visiting these will increase and more revenue will be generated for maintaining the museum. For example, education purpose is annoying for some people, by contrast, the majority of people love the fun place Owing to if the museum would be promoted as an entertainment place it can be attracted more visitors.

I believe that the museum should be both - education as well as entertain. The Museum is an institution that cares for a collection of artefacts and other objects of artistic, cultural, historical, or scientific importance. Due to, the museum has educational value as well as entertainment.

To sum up, it could be said that the museum should try their best to educate people and this can be better done if they make learning fun especially for today's youth.
 
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englishgeek

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Museums are places where important objects of culture, historical and scientific value are preserved and shows to the public. Some people said that the museum should be an entertainment place where people enjoy. Others opine that the museum should be an educational place where people earn gain valuable knowledge. However, I believe that the museum should be both- educative as well as entertaining.

On the one hand, there is are numerous reasons why some people opine that the museum should be for educational purpose, the first and foremost when people visit the museum, they want to know about the history behind the objects displayed there. For instance, Bangladesh National Museum is one of the biggest museums in Bangladesh, there are more than twenty thousand valuable monuments, art, handicraft and lots of different products exhibition in this place. Actually, the majority of those who visited this place expect to know more about the pieces of art and antiquities. Therefore, the museum should focus on providing all of that information in a nice and easy manner.

On the other hand, the reason given in favour of the museum becoming an entertainment source, is that way, the people visiting these places will increase and more revenue will be generated for maintaining the museum. For example, educational purpose is annoying for some people, by contrast, the majority of people love the fun place owing to if the museum would be promoted as an entertainment place it can be used to attracted more visitors.

I believe that the museum should be both - educational as well as entertaining. The museum is an institution that cares for a collection of artefacts and other objects of artistic, cultural, historical, or scientific importance. Due to, the museum has educational value as well as entertainment.

To sum up, it could be said that the museum should try their best to educate people and this can be better done if they make learning fun especially for today's youth.

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You gave a good example talking about the the Bangladesh National Museum, but you seemed to write a lot without saying something of much value.

Did the Bangladesh Museum do anything to make it more entertaining for young people?

What are some examples of activities that would make a museum more entertaining? I would mention 'hands-on' or 'interactive' exhibits, exhibits which use audio visual and so on.

I would mention how young people are engrossed in technology like computers and mobile phones, so museums have to adapt similarly to make them appealing to young people. Perhaps making a mobile app which people could interact with while they are in the museum. This of course is just one idea.