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Israfil Sikder

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The given pie charts compare the reasons of choosing Dorrifod University by two different age groups which are 18-24 year olds and those above 25 years old.

It is clear from the graph that proximity to home is the reason chosen by over a third of both age groups. Course offered is the second reason given by 35% of 18-24 year olds and just under a quarter of the 25+ age group. Reputation of the faculty and relation to industry is given importance by 12 % and 20% of the older age group, where as only a small minority (2% and 4%) of the younger age group choose the university for these two reasons. In contrast, facilities to study abroad and facilities on campus are valued more by the 18-24 year age group, than those aged 25 and over. Under 5% of the 25 year plus age group enroll in the university for these two reasons.

Overall both age groups have some similarities and some differences in their reasons for opting to study in the given university.

Please sir evaluate my pie chart.
 

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The given pie charts compare the reasons of for choosing Dorrifod University by two different age groups which are 18-24 year olds and those above 25 years old.

It is clear from the graph that proximity to home is the reason chosen by over a third of both age groups. Courses offered is the second reason given by 35% of 18-24 year olds and just under a quarter of the 25 plus age group. Reputation of the faculty and relation to industry is given importance by 12% and 20% of the older age group, where as only a small minority (2% and 4%) of the younger age group choose the university for these two reasons. In contrast, facilities to study abroad and facilities on campus are valued more by the 18-24 year age group, than those aged 25 and over. Under 5% of the 25 year plus age group enroll in the university for these two reasons.

Overall both age groups have some similarities and some differences in their reasons for opting to study in the given university.

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Good job overall, well done. I think you have captured the main similarities and differences in your response.