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sabita thapa

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The internet has become popular among people of all ages and has changed our lifestyle completely as this makes everything easier for human. Besides these positive impacts, it is creating more serious issues that did not prevalent in earlier generations. This essay will outline the problems associated with internet and suggest ideas to deal with those issues.

There are many problems that arise with the development of internet. One is increasing cybercrimes in all over the world. This is because individuals disclose more personal details on social media where there are many people use that information and start to blackmail and take the advantage of them. Furthermore, more people especially younger ones spend too much time on websites and lack face-to-face communication and do not socialize. As a result, they face many challenges such as lack of essential social skills and suffer from mental health because they could not share their problems with other. For instance, many school age children in Nepal face difficulties to socialize with friends at school because they spent their most time on using Facebook and deprived interaction skills.

To mitigate these issues, there should be some awareness program regarding the consequences of disclosing more personal information. This helps people to become aware before updating any further details about themselves on any social media. Another solution is parents can encourage their children to engage in outdoor and community activities, which allow them to socialise with other children. Children engage in face-to-face communication with other means that they can learn teamwork and social skills essential for later life. For instance, parents in Germany motivate their young children to take part in community activities to teach them social skills and importance of teamwork.

In conclusion, internet has increased the risk of cybercrimes if more personal information is being disclose and youngsters can lack skills necessary for their future. In order to solve these problems, making people aware about detrimental impacts of updating more about themselves and parents can focus on sending children for social events and outdoor games.
 

englishgeek

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The internet has become popular among people of all ages and it has changed our lifestyle lives completely as this it makes everything easier for humans. Besides Aside from these positive impacts, it is creating more serious issues that did were not prevalent in earlier generations. This essay will outline the problems associated with the internet and suggest ideas to deal with those issues.

There are many problems that have arisen with the development of the internet. One is increasing cybercrimes in all over the world. This is because individuals disclose more personal details on social media where there are many people that use the information and start to blackmail and take the advantage of them. Furthermore, more people especially younger ones spend too much time on websites and lack face-to-face communication opportunities and do not socialize. As a result, they face many challenges such as lack of essential social skills and suffer from mental health issues because they could not share their problems with others. For instance, many school aged children in Nepal face difficulties to socialize with friends at school because they spend their most of their time on using Facebook and depriving them of interaction skills.

To mitigate these issues, there should be some awareness program regarding the consequences of disclosing more personal information. This helps people to become aware before updating any further details about themselves on any social media. Another solution is parents can encourage their children to engage in outdoor and community activities, which allow them to socialise with other children. Children engage in face-to-face communication with other means that they can learn teamwork and social skills essential for later life. For instance, parents in Germany motivate their young children to take part in community activities to teach them social skills and the importance of teamwork.

In conclusion, the internet has increased the risk of cybercrimes if more personal information is being disclosed and youngsters can lack skills necessary for their future. In order to solve these problems, making people aware about the detrimental impacts of updating more information about themselves and parents can focus on sending children for social events and outdoor games.

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Good job overall. I think you missed mentioning some of the main problems with the internet such as:

- stalking
- cyber bullying
- child pornography
- privacy issues, such as the collection and use of people's data